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Condensation

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Like a pot boiled,
The convection starts to shake
Which twitches and rumbles through my hands.
Emotions long suffocated, grasping their way
With new found energy to the surface

The pots convection threatens the emotions downward
Suffocating them.
Hoping,
They will return from the abyss from which they grew

But this only causes more energy
as it shakes and trembles through
Until
Little bursts of steam escape, and condense along the edges
Rolling past my cheeks

The released latent heat cools 
The pot calms,
And I’m only left with the bittersweet symphony;
A memoir of these emotions I seldom admit are so near to my soul

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